Nice job on the editing and graphics. The variety of shots you got worked really well to tie everything together. I don't know if you were looking for detailed critique, but here are some things that I noticed that I think could have improved it:
1) Remember to focus carefully (a few shots seemed out of focus)
2) The dolly moves that were edited to include the starting and/or stopping seemed a little rigid and contrived. The starting and stopping were smooth, but somehow felt awkward. I also prefered the shots that panned/tilted while dollying.
3) The interview lighting had a mix of daylight and tungsten at similar levels, which I don't like. Assuming you don't have control of the color, I would suggest moving the people closer to the window so the source is larger (i.e., softer) and a higher contrast ratio relative to the tungsten fill. This will also reduce the double shadows on their faces. Bouncing the fill off of a wall will also help with this.
Chris