The display issue is just a matter of fixing the resolution (in particular, the horizontal one). It's not auto-detected, but hardcoded, based on model ID.
The red thing is an error message - probably the dumper couldn't find suitable stubs for writing to card.
However, Canon Basic dumper appears to provide a complete ROM dump for now, so the portable ROM dumper is no longer essential. Just nice to have, as a proof of concept (portable code running on all cameras). I should be able to troubleshoot it in QEMU using the Canon Basic dumps - these include the bootloader, from what I've seen.