Author Topic: second last of the 5D mIII RAW Haïku series : the 58th and 59th  (Read 4233 times)

Pidji

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by this way, please  :)


Enjoy !

PJ
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elfrabo

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Re: second last of the 5D mIII RAW Haïku series : the 58th and 59th
« Reply #1 on: July 05, 2014, 05:29:00 PM »
Nice shots, relaxing.

The smal DOF is overdone I think...

Satis

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Re: second last of the 5D mIII RAW Haïku series : the 58th and 59th
« Reply #2 on: July 05, 2014, 11:17:08 PM »
I really like this concept, actually I'm rather inspired to make my own. :)
I think adding environmental ambience is a good idea, but I found the scratching - close mic noises to be distracting. Considered using an external mike maybe?

Cool stuff.
50D IR, 600D, 550D

Pidji

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Re: second last of the 5D mIII RAW Haïku series : the 58th and 59th
« Reply #3 on: July 06, 2014, 09:49:42 PM »
You will enjoy this concept. Short time to shoot, to edit (a longer one to convert MLV to DNG + wav and ProRes material :) )
I dont hear so much close mic noise (May be this is the plastic board I use to shoot the flowers) An external mic wouldn't be better, I need to be so close to the "threaten" flower.
This overdone small DOF is the way for me to stay focus on the fragility of these thinness flowers. I'm not use to that kind of DOF, I thought it made sens.

Thanks anyway for your feedback it's always useful to read.
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MrTodd

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Re: second last of the 5D mIII RAW Haïku series : the 58th and 59th
« Reply #4 on: July 06, 2014, 11:44:59 PM »
C'est le bon. J'aime beacoup!

I really like the vibe on this. I thought the audio was as important, if not more, than the visual in this piece.

Well done.
Some Canon stuff and some other stuff too. You can't polish a turd but shit does wipe off.

Pidji

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Re: second last of the 5D mIII RAW Haïku series : the 58th and 59th
« Reply #5 on: July 07, 2014, 09:17:56 PM »
Thanks, Mr Todd. For the good vibes  :)
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