Very good. I love tilt shift style time lapse. You get a really distorted reality and the miniature look works very well. Compositionally it works. You selected some good points of view. Music is good too.
However I have a minor criticism. It's minor because it's to do with how you post processed the Images (I believe). There is a distinctive pinkness to the highlights. This is especially noticeable in the highlight detail on the clouds, in certain parts of the video.
I personally think you could fix this small problem fairly easily with some careful adjustment in ACR (or even other software!)
Otherwise, what you what you have is very good and I really rate it.
Well done.
P.S. Oh and where was it? Maybe you should add the location on the intro or outro titles?
EDIT: OK so I am an idiot!!! The place is 'Funchal' on some island north of the Canaries! (Madeira in fact)