Since nobody else wants to be helpful...
Watch your color grading. I see lots of loss of detail and weird artifacts. Look closely at his hair and the bushes, there is definitely something weird going on. Don't crush your blacks so much that we can't see any detail in the shadow areas. Your shots are shaky. The insert of his foot and the shot before it, and the shot after did not flow very well. It kind of distorts the sense of space because I see the Closeup of the guy walking towards camera, see an almost profile shot of his foot, and then see a medium shot of him walking towards the camera, but that shot it made it look like he walked all the way back to the starting point and started walking again.
Also, keep your shots in focus.
What I do like: Shot compositions. Overall, I think you did a great job at this.