Cut the blue in your shadows!!
Looks very amateurish and I would highly recommend starting with some LUTs instead of getting everything done by curves, especially if you're new to grading.
If you take some time, u can find a lot of really good workflow breakdowns in some of the posts in this forum... 
Thank you for the feedback!
I graded all the images neutrally before I applied the "creative" look. I thought I did okay:

(blacks are crushed in that still so "mostly neutral") And then I added a blue overcast to the shadows and mids! It just seemed more fun. I am really happy that I actually know what you're talking about though. At first it was really confusing.
I have been reading everything I can in the forums and I actually was going to post a question, maybe you can help!
In resolve, when do you apply a technical lut? I know you're "supposed" to apply it at the start of your grade so you're working in a different color space, but in practice resolve's tools seem to work really well with log files and I have been able to make adjustments seemingly more easily with a lut at the end of my workflow. How do you do it and why?
Online there is supposedly some heavy discussion about this and a certain answer was confusing to settle on.