From a technical standpoint colors are great, the grade is great, it's shot run and gun, the edit is great.
Maybe consider uploading in 4k just so you get a higher bitrate, I get better details this way (It's def less blocky on pans).
In my opinion, the best thing is that there is a little story, it isn't just b-rolls. It is a wholesome video really.
I ended up watching the whole thing without realizing it. Congrats.