Really nice!
Great style and the tempo. Amazing audio work. Love the look.
The beginning is just perfect, that's the way to do it. Clever, it sets the rhythm.
One big thing here is, that you have a very difficult idea: guy sits on the computer, stuff happens there...This must be one of the best ways I've seen it done. Nice graphics. Liked the way the older text lines were left blurred. Your editing is really spot on all the way.
Cinematography really really good, cool skin colors, that empty room curtains shot and the next gas station slider shot, just great.
You mentioned that you did all your audio in post, well done! Kitchen scene, keyboard, anger rising, likes counter, gas station background, everything very much in line for the mood. Setting an example.
Would have lot of questions

but here's some that I've been asking lately from other great 5D3 Raw filmmakers:
1) Did you use External monitor, or EVF?
2) Do you use waveform? If so, camera, EVF, external monitor?
3) Did you have monitor with playback or did you transfer and check your material some other way right after shooting?
4) What CF cards and transfer devices did you use?
Thanks!
S