[Short film] I professionisti (Italian - English Sub)

[LightySnake]

Hi,
this is a short that me and my friends have made for a 50h film festival.

The main subject was "Contact, communication breakdown", we had to put a mask in the short and at least 8 seconds of subjective.

Feel free to comment it, is our first work and we want to grow (so we need critical)

Edit:
I've used:
Canon EOS 550D
Sigma 30mm f1.4
Sigma 17-70 f2.8-4

[kihlbahkt]

I give it thumbs up in general. Since you asked for a critique...
Translate made for some odd dialog .

Hand held opening shot has alot of motion. Too much for me.
Guitar music too loud.
Some focus issues ( front door open scene /refridgerator scene )
The framing of the shot around 3:10 seems out of place.
Harsh correction at end of panning shot around 3:34
Scene around 3:53 is much brighter than scene before the cut.

I enjoyed it. Good job.

What ML features did you use during shooting? This is a showcase for Magic Lantern and not just short films in general.

[LightySnake]

Thanks for the critique i've watched the short and i've seen all your notes.

I've used the following functions of ML firmware:
- disable AGC
- Focus Peak
- Magic Zoom

I'm a newbie both for shooting video with the dslr(and shooting video in general) and for ML. i've only used few functions but it help me alot.